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4版： Travelling by Bike ［写作任务］ 假设你是张华，你的英国朋友Sam来中国旅游，你建议他骑自行车旅游。请结合以下要求，向他介绍自行车旅行。 要求： 1. 简要说明骑自行车旅行的好处； 2. 着重说明这种旅行方式应注意的事项（不少于3项）； 3. 词数：60-80词。 参考词汇：tool 工具；obey 遵守 ［写作分析］???? 从写作任务上看这篇文章是说明文，那么根据说明文的写作要素应注意以下几点： 1. 说明的重点要明确。从“要求”看，骑自行车旅行的好处要写得简单，这个可结合中国的实际情况，如乘车人多、易堵车等现象或骑自行车带来的好处。当然，重点应是这一旅行方式应注意的事项，可结合自己骑自行车的经验或平时的观察；也可适当列举几点或将其中某些点进行拓展叙述。 2. 本文章时态适宜用一般现在时。 3. 对注意事项的列举可以采用First, ...; Second, ...; Third, ...的结构。 4. 句式：可使用祈使句或if引导的条件状语从句。 5. 参考句型： You are welcome to ...You can take ... Riding a bike is good because ... But you should pay attention to ... I hope you have a good journey! ［写作初稿］ You are welcome to China. China is a good place for travelling. I think you can travel by bike although there are many ways to choose. Traveling by bike is good for your health. You can save some money. You can also get lots of fun. What should you pay attention to? First, you should take tools with you before you start. Second, you must obey the traffic rules. Third, you shouldn’t ride too fast. 初稿点评：作者介绍了这种旅游方式的一些好处，然后说明了三点注意事项。文章脉络比较清楚，也符合说明文的基本特点。但是，这篇文章也存在一些问题： 1. 详略不太合理，有“头重脚轻”的感觉。文章在注意事项方面笔墨太少，可以多写几点，也可就某一点稍作发挥，使文章更充实、饱满。如携带工具是为了修车，不遵守交通规则可能会发生危险等。 2. 缺乏适当的过渡词。如：Traveling by bike is good for your health. You can save some money. You can also get lots of fun. What should you pay attention to? 这些句子之间若增加一些过渡词，则文章会更连贯。 ［写作成稿］ Welcome to China. China is a good place for travelling. I think that you should travel by bike because you cannot only save money but also have a lot of fun. However, make sure that you obey all the traffic rules to keep safe and don’t ride too fast. Always remember to have a rest when you are tired and take good care of your bike. 下面举些好的句子供同学们参考： 1. You should be careful not to suffer from heatstroke when traveling in summer. 如果你在夏天旅游的话，你应该谨防中暑。 2. You cannot only save money but also enjoy yourself. 你既可以节省钱，也可玩得开心。 3. Take some tools with you, in case that you fall in trouble. 随身带些工具，以防出现故障。 4. When traveling, remember to put safety first. 旅行时，记得