2013深圳二模基础写作.ppt

* * 2013年深圳二模英语基础写作 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇你校开展“光盘”活动的报道。 审题： 体裁：记叙文---报道---第一句大容量交代5w； 时态：过去时； 表达：时间、数字的表达 二、内容要点：（可以有不同的组合） 1. 2013年3月4日星期一下午4：00, 学生食堂门口；光盘活动，学生会 主办；900多师生参加；主题：反对浪费，鼓励光盘; 2. 利用展板，展示我校的浪费现象; 3. 播放录像，了解现状：全球每年1000万死于饥荒; 4. 如果每天减少浪费5%，可救活400多万人; 5. 大家签名以示自己的决心+意义：培养习惯，节约粮食，杜绝浪费。 1．2013年3月4日星期一下午4：00, 学生食堂门口；光盘活动，学生会 主办；900多师生参加；主题：反对浪费，鼓励光盘； 注意时间的表达，从小到大。 注意：主语：900多师生；谓语：参加 At 4 pm on March 4th, Monday, 2013, in front of the Student Canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “Fight against wasting and encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the Students’ Union. 2. 利用展板，展示我校的浪费现象; 扩展，利用形容词和列举手段或者定语从句 First, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. Firstly, we had a glimpse of the shocking phenomena of wasting in the campus through pictures on display. 3. 播放录像，了解现状：全球每年1000万死于饥荒; 注意与前一句时间上的连续。 After that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. After that, we watched video clips and got to learn the fact that every year about 10 million people are dying of hunger. 4. 如果每天减少浪费5%，可救活400多万人; If we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. 使用高级结构，用被动语态 If we reduce food waste by 5% every day, 4 million lives can be saved. 继续拓展，使用定语从句增强效果，注意与上一句连接 Therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, 4 million lives can be saved, which means a lot to the world. 5. 大家签名以示自己的决心:培养习惯，节约粮食，杜绝浪费。 And then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate good habit, save food and refuse waste.