BPACommentsWEQRequestforFormalComments-NAESBSmart.docVIP

Please consider the following recommended changes: PAP03 Move section 000-1 Abbreviation and Acronyms from 2 and add under new section 16-A Appendix A – Entity-Relationship Model on page 21. This should be consistent with PAP04 and PAP09. In addition: Add “DR for Demand Response” to the Abbreviation and Acronyms. Add “DER for Distributed Energy Resources” to the Abbreviation and Acronyms. Move section 000-2, (Definition of Terms) from 3-5 and add under new section 16-A Appendix A – Entity-Relationship Model after Abbreviation and Acronyms. This should be consistent with PAP04 and PAP09. Could the first five paragraphs be moved from Introduction to Executive Summary? Add Values to the heading 016-3.7, “Supplemental Material Values”. Spell out HAN and CI, or include in Acronyms or Glossary. Page 7 Reset the numerical system from 016-3 to 016-1 under the heading Business Practice Standards starting on page 7. This should be consistent with PAP04. Page 7 (Actors) The format for the list of Actors, on page 7, appears different from the list in PAP09. Should we expect the heading and format for the actors list to be consistent between PAPs Page 7 (Utility Customer) under proposed definition, should read: “An end-use customer of the Utility Distribution Operator that may be enabled to take on roles such as Facility or Resource.” Page 7 (Communication Method) under the Proposed Definition please include the word “report” in the list. Page 7 (End Device) Does definition include back-up generators? What about batteries? Batteries will not always be located at the end of the line off the secondary system. Many now are used at the substation level. Page 7 (Facility) Will the definition work for aggregated DR? In the case of aggregated residential DR do we therefore have thousands of facilities, or a single aggregated facility? What then is the location? Nodal? If nodal does that mean that program offerings are broken out by nodal and therefo