高考英语书面表达专题辅导–基础写作[正反论证].pptVIP

如今, 选美比赛在青少年中越来越普及, 因此你们班就此开展了一场“Should beauty contests be held among teenagers?”的讨论, 请你根据下面表格内容写一份总结。 一些同学认为 另一部分同学认为 1. 爱美之心是人之常情 2. 提供了展示美和欣赏美的平台 3. 提高青少年审美品味, 如在重要场所应该如何穿衣 1. 着重外貌，麻木追求外表美 2. 商业化，参与比赛浪费时间和金钱 总结：外貌并非成功的关键，应注重内在美…… [参考范文] Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether beauty contests should be held among teenagers. Some students hold the opinion that love of beauty is part of human nature, so beauty contests not only provide a stage for people to show off their beauty but also a good chance to appreciate beauty. Beauty contests, in their opinion, can help improve teenagers’ tastes like helping them choose the right clothes for important occasions. However, other students disagree because they are afraid that most beauty contests focus on contestants’ appearance, which encourages teenagers to run blindly after appearances. Moreover, many beauty contests are too commercialized and it is a waste of time and money to take part. Although our classmates’ opinions vary, we can still safely draw the conclusion that a good face is not the key to success and we should focus more on inner beauty. [精华点评] 首先, 本文的语言比较丰富和地道, 如“人之常情”可以翻译为human nature, “提供平台”可以翻译为provide a stage for sb., “提高品位”可以翻译为“improve one’s taste”, 而“麻木追求”可以翻译为“run blindly after”。因此, 考生在平时的学习中应该多点积累丰富的词汇短语。 另外, 本文的句型也比较丰富, 第一句使用了not only...but also...的句型; 第二句把in their opinion 放在句子中间, 使句子显得更灵活; 第三句用了because原因状语从句; 第四句是并列句; 而最后一句则使用了一个Although our classmates’ opinions vary...“让步状语从句+主句”的复合句句型。 * 林辉 * * 林辉 * * 林辉 * * 林辉 * 相关短语 1. the minority/majority of... 少数/大多数…… 2. traffic safety 交通安全 3. disapprove of 不同意；不赞成 4. persuade sb. not to do... 说服某人不做…… 5. follow/take the advice 听从劝告 6. as far as I am concerned 就我所知 7. think highly of 高度评价 8. a good solution to. ..一个好的解决办法9. from my perspective 在我看来 10. have a heated discussion 进行一次热烈的讨论 11. draw the conclusion that... 得出结论 12. the key to success 成功的秘诀 13. focus more on... 更加关注…… 相关句式 1. Recently we have had a discuss