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智 课 网 S A T 备 考 资 料 SAT写作：essay例子段展开的写法 SAT主题段落有2-3个，段落长度基本要达到130-180个字。所以 段落展开是我们同学们一定要掌握的技巧。今天在这里给大家介绍的是 适用于科技类话题的罗列法。罗列式的写法一般有两种形式，第一种形 式是一个段落只写一个例子;还有一种形式是一个段落写多个例子。 我们首先讲一种形式： 罗列法一个例子 一个例子如何罗列? 答案就是我们应该罗列一个例子的方方面面。我们来看一道题目： there benefits to be gained from avoiding the use of modern technology, even when using it would make life easier? (2008.5) 不使用现代科技(即使科技可以使生活更方便)是否会得到一些好处?这个 题目我的观点是：不使用现代科技会带来一些好处。例子是汽车。 车的好处：出行方便 车的坏处：汽车事故危害健康，尾气排放家中污染，代替步行减少 段落，节奏变快生活更忙。。。 以上是我们罗列出来的车的好处和坏处。如果我们将所有的好处和 坏处写在一段不就是罗列事实吗?下面我们看罗列法成形的文章结构 ： On the surface, cars have greatly facilitated out transportation by shortening out time from one place to another and make the trip more comfortable. (这里说车带来的好处)The problems accompanying them, however, cannot be neglected. (转折说明车带来的弊端)Most notably, cars endanger human life. There are thousands of people died of accidents or injured by car hitting every day around the world. (坏处1)Besides, the waste gas emitted by automobiles is exacerbating air polluting, which is largely responsible for people’s respiratory diseases.(坏处2) More hiddenly, cars are undermining human’s physical strength. People use cars at the cost of walking, which is an excellent opportunity to exercise. (坏处3)Last but not least, with the convenience of transportation, the lives of the majority are not eased but faster, busier and more intense. (坏处4) 这种写法跟托福的写法非常接近 ，只是同学们需要稍微注意它们的 逻辑连接词。在上文中most notably, besides, more hiddenly以及last but not least都是比较好的逻辑连接词。看完我给大 家写好的段落之后同学们可以选择另外一个话题来练习一下 ，比如因特 网等等。 接下来我们来看罗列多个例子的写法。首先我们看一道题目：have modern advancements truly improved the quality of people’s lives? (2007.6) 现代进步是否真正提高了人们的生活? 我的观点是：现代的进步确实提高了人们生活的质量。我们日常生 活的例子比比皆是，比如电脑 ，手机 ，汽车，飞机 ，药物等等等。接下 来同学们看一下成型的段落如何写： By using refrigerators, we can keep food and drink fresh with no need to go to supermarket to purchase every day. (冰箱)Thanks to vaccines and advanced medical