2017版高考英语一轮总复习 专题15 短文改错课件要点.ppt

【方法指导】 语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。 语篇型错误 1.(2014·浙江)I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise (noisy) and filled with people.________ 答案　去掉had　[考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。] 2.(2014·浙江)Then everyone in the carriage began searching (∧ for) the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.________ 答案　his→its　[此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。] 3.(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)As (∧ a) result，the plants are growing somewhere.________ 答案　somewhere→everywhere　[根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。] 易错点1　平行结构中的错误 (1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. 解析　根据句意，此处为转折关系。 答案　and→but (2)(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening (∧ to) music. 解析　此处有并列连词or，其后的动词与lie是平行结构，故该动词的形式应与lie保持一致。 答案　sat→sit 【即时小练】 (1)It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it.________ 答案　but→so　[此处表因果关系，并非转折关系。] (2)It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.________ 答案　and→or　[a visitor和a guest应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人。”] (3)I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.________ 答案　so→and　[表并列关系。] (4)(2014·大纲全国)The understanding between two friends mean (means) both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.________ 答案　trusting→trust　[此处的trust和前面的have并列，应用动词原形。] 以题说法 在表达相互平行的概念时，要使用相同的语法结构。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and，but，or或连词词组not only...but also...，not...but...，either...or...，neither...nor...，as well as等。 突破指南 平行结构中的错误主要是行文逻辑上的错误，解答此类题目的关键是翻译成汉语，注意上下文含义；其次是对此类连词敏感，见到它们首先考虑前后形式一致。 易错点2　从句与并列句的错误 I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had. 解析　all前加and，表示并列关系。 答案　all前加and 【即时小练】 This would save the life of many animals，some of them have almost died out.________ 答案　them→which 以题说法 句子与句子之间的逗号只起间隔作用，不能连接句子，所以要注意从句与并列句的辨别。 突破指南 遇到此类题目，观察逗号后面有无连词，没有的话，添加适当的连词，或者把其中一句变为从句。 * 专题十五　短文改错 从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修