09年高考英语复习写作课件.pptVIP

How to write a sentence better ◆How to write: ◆How to write: He is ill, he didn’t go to school. Basic writing skills ◆Five writing steps: ◆ Five scoring levels1 ◆ Five scoring levels2 Discussion ◆ What are shinning points in this composition? Dear Sir： I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Several days later, it could neither ring nor send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, only to be told that the model had been sold out and they didn’t change a new one. So I went to the repairman.U