第一章第九部分垂悬讲义及作业.pptVIP

Chapter One： Standard Written English Punctuation Abuse标点错误 Confusion of Words用词混淆 Problems of Collocation搭配错误 Omission of Words漏词 Wordiness累赘 Disagreement不一致 Non-Parallelism不平衡 Misplaced Parts错位 Dangling Modifiers垂悬 Ambituiy模糊 Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 中国人可以这样说：“打了一小时篮球，胳膊都酸了。” 英文却不能说：Having played basketball for an hour, my arms began to ache.这样给人的感觉好像打篮球的行为者只是你的胳膊，而不是你这个人。 这种错误叫做dangling modifier,分词短语找不到行为者，只好“晃来晃去”（dangling）. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬：练习题 指出有垂悬错误的句子 判断哪些分词不是垂悬错误 批改文章 Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： After we had shouldered our knapsacks, the hike began. Shouldering our knapsacks, the hike began. Shouldering our knapsacks, we began the hike. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： On arriving at the river, the current was frightening. On arriving at the river, the current frightened us. When we arrived at the river, the current frightened us. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： If one is to hike well, endurance is needed. To hike well, one needs endurance. To hike well, endurance is needed. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： When only a baby, she was taught to swim by her father. When she was only a baby, her father taught her to swim. At the age of six months, the father taught her to swim. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： Going through the red light, the traffic police on duty stopped him. Going through the red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty. The traffic police on duty stopped him as he went through the red light. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： After three hours of practice, a drink was what the thirsty dancers wanted. Having practiced for three hours, the thirsty dancers wanted a drink. A drink was what the thirsty dancers wanted after they had practiced for three hours. Dangling Modifiers 垂悬 下面每一组里都有三句话，其中一句话有垂悬错误，请你把这些病句指出来： While visiting the Jungle Park, I saw a baboon scrambled onto the hood