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托福写作之段落展开 1.词汇和固定短语要识记，主要是3类: ～环境的，经济的，社会进步等题目经常涉及的名词或者名词短语;～表示程度等的形容词和能够恰当修饰动词的副词;～起承转合作用的连接词和短语。2.在正确，易懂的基础上，力求句型的变化多端，插入语，从句，倒装，虚拟等。3.看清题目要求写什么，有比较的，要写出两者的不同，不要只说你支持的。 　　4.不同的reason不要糅合到一块去，每段中心要明确，且reason段落要用英文写作的方式，开门见山的在段落开头指出;既然要成段，那么你 所选择的topic sentence一定要能扩展，也就是有东西好写，而且容易些。虽然一个论点你可能有N个理由，但那些很有道理，但是你用英文无法表达清 楚的，就不用写了，这不是上万字的论文。 6.分论点一出就要有example，两三个case足以,并且事例逻辑上能够支持原因。7.整篇文章不要出现第二人称you，your，这是前辈的指点(指点了pumpkin，然后她又“数落”我的)，多用people;你想，you就是阅卷人，你凭什么张口就用人家的书面语言教导人家呢? 8.个人的观点:尽可能的避免单独使用he/she，考虑到性别歧视问题。但是，如果你要顶字数的话，也请用 he or she 。9.口语化是初级者的大问题之一，写作文的时候往往是先想中文该怎么说，然后做个翻译工作;本来对非母语就很能驾驭，这样一来，说大白话，就直接导致句式的单一;所以还是要看看真题阅读文章的文法。 use?specific?reasons?and?examples?to?support?your?answer 要求通过使用清晰而又合适恰当的解释、例子等细节做到全文良好的组织和良好的展开。理由和例子势必是全文必备之精华。 段落展开的方法有很多，举例论证、因果论证、对比论证还有让步论证等 举例论证：提出论点→适当延伸支持论点→给出例证（细节）→得出结论。即每个论点都要有理由，每个理由都要有例子，每个例子都要有细节。 一，个人事例 ?When?it?comes?to?the?merits?acquired?from?part-time?jobs,?I?could?think?of?no?better?illustration? than?the?following?one?of?my?personal?experience?During?the?summer?vocation?of?the?freshman? year,?I?found?a?part-time?job?in?McDonald’s, serving?as?a?waitress.?From?morning?till?night,? when?dealing?with?various?kinds?of?customers,?I? had?to?adjust?my?mentality?and?changed?my?tone? in?order?to?react?to?them.?Besides,?to?be? cooperative?and?helpful?when?communicating?with colleagues?and?to?be?modest?and?respectful? when?talking?with?leaders?are,?indeed,?daily? attention?for?me.?Obviously,?after?a?month’s?part-time?job,?my?communication?skills?had?been?improved?definitely. Group tours plan travelers’ entire route. Because their trip has already been arranged,people do not have to worry about where they are going or how they are getting there. For example,my family once took a package tour to America. The travel agency arranged everything. It took care of the hotel reservations, transportation, and sightseeing. Thanks to the travel agency, we could just relax and enjoy our entire trip. 三．?假设情况 Let?us?consider?the?follo