英语书面表达2011.pptVIP

写作步骤 细节2： “高桌子” 代表什么？ ①仔细找要素： 大狗、小狗、香肠、高桌子 ②认真审细节： 细节1： “大狗的背”代表什么？ ▲大狗的背-父母或他人的关心、支持、帮助、爱、肩膀、力量等 ▲高桌子-面临的困难、挑战、麻烦、压力等 2010年 海淀期中 ③分析要素与细节的联系，揭示要素寓意角度： ◆香肠（sausage）: desires,ambitions,dreams,goals, achievements, concerns,success, hope… ◆ 大狗（the big dog）: parents, adults, teachers, friends, those who help us to realize our dreams， people who have great power or abilities ◆ 小狗（the little dog）: children, kids, those who need help from others 从小狗角度： a、借他山之石 The picture reminds me of the importance of other people’s help. We should catch every opportunity to get help from others on the way of longing for success. b、学会感恩 To my understanding, the picture conveys the message of gratitude. From the picture, I gain the message that no matter how we have reached, never can we forget who bring us up and who make the person we are today. ④多角度选择立意: 大狗、小狗、两者 从大狗的角度： 父母给我们力量 In my opinion, the picture intends to illustrate the idea that it’s our parents who pave the road for us to achieve a new height. 从两者的角度： 学会合作 What the picture wants to convey to us is that cooperation among people is vital to success. From this picture, we can learn that cooperation is what helps us to get a win-win situation. Cooperation can bring benefits to everyone. ④多角度选择立意: 大狗、小狗、两者 ⑥描图（白描，要素间建立联系，为议图作好铺垫） ⑦构思立意句： What the picture gets across/conveys to us is the message that … ⑧建立过渡句（揭示要素与立意间的联系） The sausage is to the little dog what dreams and goals are to us people. The mother dog’s back represents parents’ love and support on the way we pursue our dreams. ⑨选择论证方法： 自圆其说，自然扣图，逻辑清晰，交际得体 a.释义法 b.正反论证法 c.例证法 ⑩结尾升华立意：采用强调句、倒装句、呼吁等形式 3）表达技巧？ 描议一体 要素：2个杯子+杯中物+笑脸 笑脸代表什么？ 杯子代表什么？ 杯中物代表什么？ 2010年 海淀期末考试开放作文 As can be seen in the picture, the two cups are smiling, regardless of how much water they each have. One cup is almost full while the other is not. The picture indicates that people should always be op