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高考练习：农村儿童失学问题 请根据下表，给《中国日报》写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因：1.家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，学生不得不去赚钱养家。2.部分家长认为女孩子上学无用，不愿意让她们上学。3.部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿意上学。 看法：1.每个儿童包括女孩都应该有受教育的机会。2.全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。注意：1、不要逐字逐句翻译。 2、语句要通顺连贯。 3、字数字在100词左右。 Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling. As a result, some students have to stay at home to earn money to support their families. Another reason is that many parents think it’s useless for the girls to study and they would not like them to go to school. The third reason is that some children are not interested in their lessons, and would not like to go to school. In my opinion, all children including girls should have the chance to receive an education. People should pay more attention to the education of children ,because they will play a very important part in the future of our country. 满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言单位，如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。 常见的句子之间的连接手段有： 使用代词指代上一句中的名词  使用连接词 使用平行结构   高考大纲中常用的连接词: 表并列补充关系的: 表因果关系的: 表条件关系的: 高考大纲中常用的连接词: 表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表因果关系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, 表条件关系的: if, as long as, unless 表转折对比关系的:  表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of,, unlike,, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…， the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others,  表时间关系的: 表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, soon,, recently, since, from then on, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, now, after, presently, later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表换一种方式表达: 表进行举例说明: 表陈述事实: 表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it anot