unit 1 section ⅳ writing.ppt

* Section Ⅳ Writing 原句 1 I wonder if its because I havent been able to be outdoors for so long that Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. 我不知道这是不是因为我长期无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切 与大自然有关的事物都无比狂热。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①I wonder... ②I havent been able to be outdoors for so long. ③Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. 合并之第一步 ： 由于句②和句③之间有“因为…… 所 以……”的逻辑因果关系，可以用 because 将它们合并：Ive grown so crazy about everything to do with nature because I havent been able to be outdoors for so long.为了强调原因状语从 句，可以采用强调句结构“It is...that...”。 合并之第二步：句②和句③合并后的复合句作句①中谓语 动词 wonder 的宾语，故可以用宾语从句将它们合并，且 wonder 后接宾语从句时一般用 if 引导。 仿写 ①我想知道是不是因为明天要考试，你才变得如此紧张。 (提示：紧张的 nervous) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②我想知道是不是因为天气突变才导致大量的鱼死亡。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ I wonder if it is because there will be a test tomorrow that you feel so nervous. I wonder if it is because the weather changed suddenly that many fish died. 原句 2 She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hiding place, because she was concerned about whether they would be discovered.她发现很难在躲藏处安顿和平静下来，因为她担心他 们是否会被发现。 点评 这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： ①She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hiding place. ②She was concerned about something. ③Whether they would be discovered. 合并之第一步：句③是说明句②中 something 的具体内容， 故可用宾语从句将句②和句③合并起来。 合并之第二步：句②和句③合并后与句①构成“因为…… 所以……”的逻辑因果关系，可用连词 because 引导原因状语 从句，将它们合并起来。 仿写 ①我发现在这么冷的天开车有点不安全，因为路上已经结 冰了。(提示：结冰 freeze) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ②她认为她的老板很难相处，因为他总是看起来很严肃。 ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ I find it dangerous to drive on such a cold day, because it is frozen on the road. She thinks it hard to get along with her boss, because he