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IELTS Writing ---- Catherine Introduction 时长： 60分钟 A类： 小作文、 大作文 B类： 书信、大作文 评分：9分制 Task 1 、Task 2 写作常见问题 （1）题目看不懂 （2）没想法：有想法≠胡扯；观点抽象，写不下去； （3）分论点主次不分，或者考官无法接受的论点(文化差异) （4）语法不通，表达不地道 对 策 尝试用不同的方法写同一个句子，练习句子多样化表达 多样化：同义词替换，词性变化，主语从句的运用， 强调句运用，there be句型运用，倒装，插入语，伴随状态 段 落 结 构 段落（paragraph）是由表达单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea）的一组句子构成，是文章结构的基本独立单位。 主题句topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences，结论句concluding sentence 主 题 句 位置 关键词（具体）：控制和限制段落的发展；说明段落发展的方法 原句：He can fix a bicycle himself. 修改： He can fix a bicycle himself in several ways. There are several reasons why he can fix a bicycle. 练习：She tries to improve her looks. 推 展 句 主要推展句：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。 （主题句）There are several factors affecting climate.（推展句1） One factor is the a mount of sunlight received. （推展句2）Altitude, or the height above sea level, also determines climate. （推展句3）The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. （推展句4）In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere. 次 要 推 展 句 次要推展句是指对主要推展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。 I don’t teach because teaching is not easy for me. Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic, carpenter, writer. For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty-palm, sink-stomach profession. Red-eye, because I never feel ready to teach no matter how late I stay up preparing. Sweaty-palm, because I’m always nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. Smoking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I was even more boring than usual. 段 落 发 展 方 法 列举、举例、对比、分类、因果分析 过 渡 词 解释：now, in addition, for, in this case, furthermore, in fact The problem, in this case, is hard to solve. 强 调 Certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important Indeed, a dessert is always enjoyable. 转 折 But, however, although, though, yet, except for Yet there was still a chance that he would win. 举 例 for e