四级与写作讲解(课堂讲解)1.pptVIP

一、?四级考试对作文的要求; 题材现实性 四级写作的题材具有显著的现实性，基本可以分为两大类： 1. 贴近大学生的学习工作及课余生活的校园题材 2. 论及当前社会的现象、发展变化及进步的热点话题。 ; 1. Recreational Activities (2008. 6) 2. What Electives to Choose (2007. 12) 3. Welcome to Our Club (2007. 6) 4. Volunteers Needed (2006. 6) 5. Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist? (2005. 12) 6. Teachers’ Day (2005. 6) 7. A Campaign Speech (2005. 1) 8. A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction (2004. 6) 9. A Letter in Reply to a Friend (2004. 1) ;关于此类题材的真题作文列举如下： 1. Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12) 2. Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12) 3 How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010）;二、评分原则 ;三、评分标准 ;Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least l20 words but no more than l80 words．;　　一、审题;　　一、审题 ;　二. 文体要统一 ;　三.文字要连贯;　三.文字要连贯 ;四. 内容要一致 ;五. 表达方式要多样化;六.语言要流畅;七.首尾要呼应;八. 检查要到位;;审题时，除了要把握好图表的表层信息外， 还要分析图表的深层含义，如原因、根源、可能的发展趋势等。图表中所提供的说明文字往往是问题的切入点，一定要仔细分析。 描述数据时要抓住重点，为中心服务，不必面面俱到，切忌毫无目的地罗列图表中的数据。如果数据较多，抓住图表中的极端点（如最大或最小、最多或最少，最好或最差）和基本相同进行描述。主题句应明确，最好放在文章的开头，这样会使重点突出，主题明了。;常见模板第一段：总体描述图表，指明时间段，指出突出变化或不同常用句型或短语：As is clearly shown in the chart/ table/ graph, ___________According to the figures given in the table/ chart/ graph, ____________It can be seen from the table/chart/graph, _____________________.The figures in the table/chart reflect that ________________, especially, ________________（指出突出变化）;第二段：（分析原因）There are several factors leading to this change / difference ……..There are several reasons for _____________.(引出原因)?To begin with, _______(原因一)In addition, ______________（原因二)For exa