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如何润色英语作文;作文的核心任务：;优秀作文应具备的六个基本特征：;;13种常见的语言错误; (3) 句子成分残缺 But the car which painted red didn’t stop. The young man running in the street fast. (4) 习惯搭配乱用 I very like the novel Then we set off digging, planting and watering. ; (5) 汉式英语 The car is yellow color. Next month have a sports meeting. (6) 名词单、复数不分 He will give us a talk on American film. He is one of the best player in our school. ; (8) 用词不当 He doesn’t want to say something about this matter. I hope you to help the girl with her homework. (9) 拼写和词形变化错误 The car hitted the old man and drived away. On his way to school, he sew a little girl. ; (10) 前后人称不一致 Swimming and football are his favorite sports, and he likes it all his life. The little girl usually goes to school at 7 in the morning, but today he was late for school. (11) 分词作状语、逻辑主语不一致 Having heard the news, her heart beat faster and faster. Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. ;(12) 动词原形作主语 Walk is good for you health. Drink wines is harmful. (13) 一个简单句出现两个谓语 There was no bus, we had to walk home. There are a lot of students like this movie. ;Last summer I go to America and studied at a language school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where I invited to talk about Tianjin. After that they asked me a lot of things about China. But I couldn’t explain them with English clearly. I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have already studied English for eight years, I can’t use it very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countries in the future.;The Story about Growth is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested. The play 76. tells h