真题作文模版.ppt

依葫芦画瓢 你会吗？ ——真题作文模版写作 商务英语教研室 张敏 作文写作精要 评分标准 2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 　　5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 　　8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 　　11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 　　14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。) 写作对策 1. 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 2. 作文结构层次是否清晰 3. 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误。 4. 是否能恰当使用过渡性词语 5. 作文字数是否达到要求 6. 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮 五大类模版 观点类 观点子类模版1----对立观点 Different people have different views on__. Some people think that __,while others argue that___. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe__. For another, __. Just think of __, who___. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that__. Only if __ can we__, just as the saying goes,___. My View on Opportunity 1. 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。 2. 我的看法。。。。 3. 结论。 Different people have different views on opportunity. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world,while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe opportunities for “every dog has his day”. For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society. Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the saying goes:“Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.” 观点子类模版2----对立观点 People’s opinions are always different once they talk about__. Those who __ maintain that __. They also firmly believe that__. Many people think otherwise. On the one hand, __. On the other,__. My own opinion is that_sth._, in this fast-developing information era, has become more than common and ac