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夏老师点评四级英语作文 English wherever, whenever Cracking CET 在本期四六级考试专栏中，全国四六级考委会的夏国佐教授对读者题为The digital age的作文进行了讲评和改写。这是2007年12月份的六级作文试题。按照六级作文评分标准，作文部分满分15分，这篇文章得11分。如果你希望自己的文章得到夏教授的点评，请按下面要求写出一篇短文，发到elt@21。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1.如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如…… 2.数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响 读者原文 The digital age Nowadays, the use of digital products has been widely spread. Computers, MP3 players, digital cameras, etc have become a crucial part of our daily life. Whatever we are occupied, things could hardly be done without them. Digital products are in connection with everybody in contemporary times. As far as ones work is concerned, computers serve to make everything done more efficiently and conveniently. He or she will never be buried in piles of papers to search for data; just click the mouse, and information around the world will come into sight on the screen in few seconds. Besides, digital products like MP3 or MP4 players are necessities for us students, who are enabled to listen to English regardless of places and time with the help of the products. Moreover, with digital products, life becomes more interesting and colorful. For instance, in terms of amusement, due to digital cameras and the like, photographs can be taken or deleted at will without we worrying about the cost of films. In summary, digital products have made a great influence on our work, study and life, which means we now live in a digital age. With the development of technology and society, the degree of digitalization will surely become increasingly higher and better for human being. 修改后的文章 The digital age Nowadays, the use of digital products is widespread. Computers, MP3 players and digital cameras have become a crucial part of our daily life. Whatever we are engaged in, we could hardly do anything without them. Digital products play an important role in e