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What is a good summary? 1. 要点齐全 1. 要点齐全 It must include all the main and correct points . It must include all the main and correct points . 2. 客观，无主观评论 2. 客观，无主观评论 It is a simple report of what the writer has said. It is a simple report of what the writer has said. No personal comments are needed. No personal comments are needed. 3. 高度概括，舍去非关键细节 3. It’s a brief restatement, in your own words. It’s a brief restatement, in your own words. Only key details are needed, if necessary. Only key details are needed, if necessary. 主题：诚实才是上策 1.The author tells a story about (某人) a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who (做某事) couldn’t find a job in Germany (原 因)because of his stealing rides at the subway, (启 示)which shows honesty is the best policy. (2011广州 一模) 2. (某人做了某事)The author happened to pick an umbrella on a bus and tried to find its owner. (结 果)She was pleased to find the owner and also got a job offered by the owner of the umbrella. 概括记叙文的要点 一、概括方法 我们应首先找出这篇材料中故事的主 角, 然后找出该主角(何时何地因何原 因或出于何种目的)做了何事, 再弄清 结果如何, 以及该故事说明了一个什 么道理或给人有什么启示。 在写作过程中还注意以下几点： (1) 由于字数限制为大约30个词, 我们不一定要使用 The story tells us或者The author/The passage shows us that等开头套语。 (2)时态应与原文时态一致。 (3)一般以第三人称的形式来表述。如I要变成The writer, he/she等。 (4)可选用以下句式开头。 The passage/story is about... The author tells us a story about a... The passage is a story about... 二、超级模板(仅作参考) (1) In order to... sb. did sth. / sth. happened. As a result/Therefore,... (2) sb. did sth. / sth happened, which shows... due to / thanks to / because (of)...which shows... 记叙文的概括模式 （过去时为主）： 事件+原因+结果/启示/意义 二、记叙文概括容易出现的问题： 1、概括不全，抓不住要点； 2 、细节描写过多，主题不突出； 3 、把握不住文章的寓意或启示； 4 、语言平淡，句式变化少。 三、超级仿写 (1) Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the sa