高三英语复习写作书面表达讲评课 (2).pptVIP

2008年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议．假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括． １．向公众开放，用于健身 ２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益 ３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客． ４．……… Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ①08年奥运会刚刚落幕. ②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议. ③你想写一些建议 ①向公众开放，用于健身. ②租给体育公司，创造经济效益. ③开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力 1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful. 1.The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many stadiums unused  1.we can let stadium make sense Only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit. We should take the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise. 你班同学参加了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以养宠物（狗和猫）。请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇作文并说明自己的观点和建议。 * * * 高三复习写作讲评课 Assessment practice of Writing 内容 语法 思想 框架---组织结构 要点全，拓展有度，有效 连接词，作文结构紧凑；流畅 准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型 开放能引起读者的共鸣,灵魂 1.单词拼写或用错： Give you some advise I just provide you my own suggests. They can attact visitors. advice suggestion attract 2.时态语态问题 We may given it to the PE company. We may give it to the PE company.. 3. 主谓一致问题 The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners. The sport stadiums are very great and are highly spoken of by the foreigners. 4. 逐字翻译问题 The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use. The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises. 5. 词性混淆问题 It can creative money.. It can create/bring in money. Many people can use them to strong our body. Many people can use them to strengthen our body. 6. 介词短语的运用问题 I am writing to make some advice