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【素材示例】 最近,你校学生会倡议在全校开展“低碳生活”活动。请你为校广播站写一篇英语稿件。内容包括: 1.我们为什么要低碳生活。 2.在日常生活中,我们该怎么做。 审题构思: 篇章结构: 内容要点: 拟关键词: 构建句式: 【佳作播报】 Lets live a low-carbon life Low-carbon living means that everyone of us should try our best to cut down the consumption of energy to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide,which can help to lessen air pollution and protect the environment.In order to make the earth a better place for the generations to come,low-carbon living is becoming more and more popular in the world. What shall we do to live a low-carbon life?First of all,lets go by bike or on foot instead of going by car.Furthermore,① lets try to save water,paper and electricity in our daily life.In addition,using environmentally friendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags will greatly cut down the amount of white garbage globally.② Protecting the environment calls for the efforts of everyone and every small effort of us will make a big difference. 【赏文酌句】 作者文笔清晰,段落分明,问题分析透彻、到位,观点明确。在句法上使用了: ①高级词汇和短语:try ones best;cut down;in order to;call for;make a difference ②过渡词语:first of all;furthermore;in addition ③黄金句式:that引导的宾语从句...that everyone of us should...;which引导的非限制性定语从句...which can help to lessen air pollution...;动词-ing形式作主语using environmentally friendly shopping bags will... 【佳句模拟】 1.furthermore adv.“而且,此外”是写作中常用的表达“递进关系,过渡语”的高频用词。 [模拟] The house isnt big enough for us,and furthermore,its too far from the town. 这所房子对我们来说不够大,另外它离城镇也太远。 2.v.-ing或短语作主语,或用it作形式主语,是很常用的句型。 [模拟] Learning new words is very useful to us. 学习生词对我们很有用。 Its a waste of time arguing with him. 和他辩论是浪费时间。 佳句背诵 What really matters is whether you can concentrate on your lessons.真正要紧的是你是否能全神贯注于你的功课。 Above all/Most important of all, you should believe in yourself.最重要的是,你要相信自己。 The reasons for this can be listed as follows. 原因如下。 The answer to this problem involves many factors. 这个问题的答案涉及很多因素。 There are several
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