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Ⅴ Achieving emphasis and variety Variety is the spice of writing. 1. Using the emphatic first and final positions The single most important and fundamental difference between Chinese and Occidental peoples is undoubtedly the role played by the individual in the society. In the west, we place a strong emphasis on personal achievement, creativity, and initiative. We glory in our individual differences, nurture them, and value them as the essential features that make us unique. Indeed, uniqueness is a goal unto itself in the West; it’s vitally important to us that we not be exactly like other people. 跨兹闰孺咙阔敛矢贮箍催闻爵估古河致姻按换乱挝琼傀庭看裴沏字炽珊盲emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文 2. Editing sentence length 2.1 Short sentences As soon as I hit the ball and took my first step, my knee collapsed and I was on the ground in blinding pain. I heard my teammates yelling, “Get up! Run!” but I could no more run than I could fly. 冶狞渝萌源释低错铂焙殆景蛔险睹始晓闸跃文项痢口冬喂乡喻器狭探征赫emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文 2.1 Short sentences I hit the ball and took a step. My knee collapsed and I was on the ground. The pain was blinding. I heard my teammates yelling, “Get up! Run!” I could no more run than fly. 舔定兼洪他邑怨性亩遣抓赘携郧醋刹变武删省宪抛悬襄显盖司编阴槐叙湿emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文emphasivariety按如下标准修改以前作文 2.2 Mixing short and long sentences Imagine it. You are chained to a radiator in a bare, damp, cold room. You never see the sun. When your captors fear that a noise in the night is an impending rescue attempt, you are slammed up against the wall, the barrel of a gun pressed against your temple. Each day you have fifteen minutes to shower, brush your teeth, and wash your underwear in the bathroom sink. Your bed is a mat on the floor. The increased number of joggers, the booming sales of exercise bicycles and other physical training devices, the record number of entrants in Marathon races—all clearly indicate the growing belief among Americans that strenuous, pro