【2017年整理】建议与英语作文写作.ppt

How to write a letter for advice;　如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。;假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：;第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?;第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：;建议信篇章结构;适当运用模板;Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua;Dear____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____. I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX ;第二步：搜索相关词组或句型;学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街;润色小建议; The traffic is busy during the rush hours.;润色小建议; 加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤;加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ what’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.;making the situation more serious.; 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险;Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.;政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。;1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, …;第三步. 连句成文;反面范例;反面范例;反面范例;反面范例;不推荐字体;优秀作文范例1;;优秀作文范例3;优秀作文范例4;Evaluation only.