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2017届高三英语书面表达教学案例分析 ? 一、教学目的： 通过写一篇提纲式作文，掌握基本的英语书面表达写作技巧，从而提高英语写作能力。 二、教学内容： 英语书面表达: 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息：给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为 40%的同学认为 1.不应收门票。 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1.应收门票，但票价不要太高 2.支付园林工人工资 3.购买花木 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数：120左右。3：参考词汇：门票—entrance fee I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks ……. ? 三、课堂实录： Teacher :We are going to write an article today.(出示题目) Who can list the writing points? Student A: 60 percent;??shouldn’t receive tickets;??public place;??build gate ,wall;??city image;??40 percent;??should receive tickets;??don’t be too expensive;??pay workers; buy flowers and trees Student B:? had a discussion;??the topic is : should the park receive ticket fee? Teacher: You should pay attention to the words and expressions that have been given: Whether an entrance fee should be charged? Teacher : Please write your essay.(20 minutes.) Teacher：写作提示：1.阅读提示。2.要点写全。 3.时态一致。 4.人称一致。 (二十分钟后) Teacher:?Let’s ask some of the students to read their essays. Student C?read his article. Teacher?write some of the typical mistakes on the blackboard： 1.There are 60% students against the idea.→There are 60%students who are against the idea./60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. 2.?Park shouldn’t receive entrance fee.→a park should be free of charge./people needn’t buy tickets to enter the park. 3.The money can pay garden workers.→The money can be used to pay the workers./They can use the money to pay gardeners and other workers./They can the gardeners and workers with the money. Student D?read his article. Students?correct his mistakes. Teacher :?Sample version Dear editor, ????I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. ????Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge.