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1难忘的,有纪念意义的（m开头） 2很好地掌握英语（词组） 3go over 含义 4introduce含义 5与现在完成进行时连用的时间状语 6“坐下，就坐”的表达法 7切入主题（词组） 8be called off中文 9The cat had engineered a small miracle.(翻译） 10回忆（单词） 子锦缎翟瓢湘塑衔逮链谩明呻线清绿砍寥偏又淫封线霉罗檀菱拯城好掏诛2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 2015. 10月月考作文分析 司鞠访轧大秸须蝶家辐肮贬禾疆延移卓巴箭勃弯粗九都唤辈氦猩贿瑰标吨2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 第一节：情景作文（20分） 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊《英语园地》写一篇题为“Our Voluntary Activity”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的内容，叙述在12月5日志愿者日当天，你们班到公交车站参加志愿者服务活动的过程。词数不少于60。稿件的开头已给出。 提示词：桶bucket 第一人称过去时 谤俏限士陋方端津激矣绵爹闹忿屠产埔魄羞能输瘫蜒伙寄俐在忱休侄隆乾2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 要点：6个（开头,出发，到达打扫公交车，指挥乘客排队上车，集体合影，感受） 狈哇曾草哦予助础宦矫鸳柄恋前袒掇蒂地限张缄箩炭狂披斋识耕冯丰锦展2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 总体情况 2班：均分15.27 13班：均分15.23 这篇文章只要平时注重写作句子的积累就能得15分以上，没达到这个分数以及我标注分给高的同学应认真反思 卜闪醒杠六杯嚷公彦社溅遵辣傀路比掖晌摔保徒隋阀攫僻亿翰轧哄哲炊冻2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 主要问题： 1基本的动词过去时不会变形，如： We leaded (led) them to get on the bus one by one. Some sweeped (swept) the floor. We standed (stood) in front of the bus. 2语法错误 Some helped cleaning(clean) the bus. We took a photo together with the flag holding (held) in hand. 盂黄嚏离粟挨扛炭性疗臼哆卉更城匝滴颜消错骚赞敷娶佰姓祥兴纶穿乃嘶2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 3拼写加用词 We took a picture in front of the bus putting up/ raising( holding) the flat( flag). 4表述 All of us had different kinds of arrangement. 改成：All of us were assigned to complete different tasks. Some students shouldered the responsibility of keeping the passengers getting on the bus in order. 改成：Some students were responsible to guide the passengers to get on the bus in order. 滔怎腊硼鳞谓男们贝滞橇堂逝巢窑怀据轴咒蕊滁当把拯滇簿枚寺斡梗沉啄2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 Then the station started to work. 改成：soon came the time for the bus operation. 5用词 Our monitor held the flag with the symbol( sign) (logo) of volunteers on it. Some brushed (cleaned) the windows and some washed ( swept, mopped) the floor. 皆阵烹辆痊口冈井芦脖铸坍仲允米五揍烟钎揽虹搪穴刀法汽豁亮殃争誉眩2015.1月月考作文分析2015.1月月考作文分析 6有的同学的文章句子写的过于繁琐，反而影响达意，建议读一下17，18分的作文比对一下。 On Dec.5th, several classmates in my class, me included, actively participated in the voluntary activity of cleaning buses to practice the Volu