新世纪商务英语综合教程基础篇1(第五版)unit1.pptVIP

Practical Writing 三、简省错误 　　用词简省并不能够随意省掉一些属于固定搭配的或有助于理解句意的词。省掉就会影响句子的正确理解。常见的简省错误有： 　　1. 部分谓语的省略（错误地省略部分谓语，会使句子结构失去平衡） 原句: Sales managers always have and always will do their best to stimulate enthusiasm at the sales. 改为: Sales managers always have done and always will do their best to stimulate enthusiasm at the sales. Practical Writing 　　2. 介词的省略 　　常见介词省略错误有两种：一是有的句子要求有介词缀后方能使句意完整并合乎逻辑；另一种是介词搭配使用方面，有些词需要固定的介词与之搭配使用，当它们出现在并列结构中时，除非它们所需的介词是一致的，否则介词不能省略。 原句: Mr. White has confidence and ambition for his employees. 改为: Mr. White has confidence in and ambition for his employees. 　　3. 比较级中必要词的省略 原句: I had more respect for Mr. White than his wife. 改为: I had more respect for Mr. White than for his wife. 或者: I had more respect for Mr. White than his wife did. Practical Writing Exercises 1．The new comers cleaned the office, the other staff prepared the files.（接排句） The new comers cleaned the office and the other staff prepared files. After the new comers had cleaned the office, the other staff prepared the files. 2． Have you got a pen to sign these papers? (介词的省略) Have you got a pen with which to sign these papers? Correct the following sentences according to the tips in the brackets. Practical Writing Exercises 3．This preparative training is not as strict as the other one is strict. (比较级中必要词的省略) This preparative training is not as strict as the other one. 4． Because he was not there. (残缺句) He knew nothing about it because he was not there. Correct the following sentences according to the tips in the brackets. Practical Writing Exercises 5． My pen is broken. Could you lend me yours to write? (介词的省略) My pen is broken. Could you lend me yours to write with? Correct the following sentences according to the tips in the brackets. Time for Fun ? “It’s forbidden to steal hotel towels please. If you are not the person to do such things, please don’t read the notice.” — In a Tokyo Hotel ? “Please bathe inside the tub.” — In a Japanese Hotel Room ? “The lift is being fix