中考书面表达训练.pptVIP

下面是在期中考试书面表达题 My pleasant trip 中同学们写的句子，看一看错在哪里，在句子上标出来，并改正： 1. I was went to the Great Wall in the last year. 2. Last year, I and my parents had been to Shanghai. 3. My friends and me by bike go there. 4. It took our about 40 minutes to got there. 5. I lied on the beach and enjoy the sunshine. 6. The next day, we returned my hometown. Answer: 1. I went to the Great Wall last year. 2. Last year, my parents and I went to Shanghai. 3. My friends and I went there by bike. 4. It took us about 40 minutes to get there. 5. I lay on the beach and enjoyed the sunshine. 6. The next day, we returned to my hometown. 写作题的答题步骤与技巧 1. 认真审题，列出提纲： 2. 联词成句，打好草稿： 3. 通读改错，书写工整： 弄清写作要求：包括题目、所给材料的提示、格式、所提供的图画内容以及要求的词数等，抓住要点，注意文体。 根据规定的要求构思，可以先列出提纲，考虑要选用的人称、时态、词语等内容。 根据写作提纲和前面的思维成果，按要求分段书写，使用地道的语言。 尽量使用自己已掌握的、熟悉的词汇和句型，如果遇到不熟悉或想不起的单词，就用同义词（或近义词）代替，多使用容易的词和简单句，少用难词和复合句。 写完之后，要认真阅读全文，检查以下几个方面：看是否符合题意要求，有没有遗漏的地方，语言是否通顺、流畅；看语法是否正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写，标点，动词的时态、语态，名词的单复数，形容词和副词的比较级、最高级，主谓一致，冠词的用法，词语的搭配等，最后认真地抄写到试卷上。 记叙文的写作 记叙文： 是以“记事为主”的一种文体，就是把人物的经历和事件的发生、发展、变化的过程表述出来。 记叙文的写作要求 1. 交代清楚“六要素”： 时间 地点 人物 事件 原因 结果 重笔讲述事件的起始、发展，结尾要精练。 2. 围绕中心组织材料： 选择能表现中心思想的材料，材料要精练、突出、有效。 3. 叙述事情要条理： 事件安排要条理分明，注意事件之间的联系、过度、照应，主次分明，详略得当，并恰当运用顺序、插叙、倒叙等叙述方法。 4. 意图明确、句子简练、文字精练。 记叙文练习：记述暑假中的一次郊游活动 根据表格所提示的内容，写一篇短文，记述去年暑假中的一次郊游（outing）活动。词数：80-100。 weather Sunny Time Monday, August 16th Place A hill about 2 kilometers north How By bike Time to leave 8:45 Arrival time 9:30 Activities Morning: walk to the waterfall, swimming; taking photos; Noon: cooking lunch Afternoon: singing;dancing Time to return 5:40pm An Outing It was a Monday on August 16th last year. It was sunny. I went for an outing with my several friends. We went to a hill about 2 kilometers north of here. We left by bike at a quarter to nine in the morning and arrived there at half past nine. We did all kinds of activities there. We walked to the waterfall near here. We spent the whole morning swimming