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润色技巧 6.　At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. 7.She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music. 8.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. 9.Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms./Twenty–six classrooms make up our school. 10.You’ll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house. 1. 一得知那个消息，他就放声大哭。 Hardly had he learnt the news when he burst into tears. 2. 据说他看电影去了。 It is said that he has gone to the cinema. He is said to have gone to the cinema. 3. 尽管他是个孩子, 但英语学的不错。 Although he is a child, he knows much English. Child as he is, he knows much English. 4. 既然你时间有限，那么我们就立刻开会吧。 Since your time is limited, let’s start our meeting right away. Now that your time is limited, let’s start our meeting right away.  ⑴When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式） On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an e-mail. ⑵To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him. It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things . ⑶Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. ⑷He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型 ①.It was… ②.not until…) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. ⑸I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虚拟语气） I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help. If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam. ⑹She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. ⑺They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) Singing and laughing, they went back to school. ⑻I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） No matter what he says,