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书面表达突破(六) ——俗语/谚语类 原题再现 　　我国有一句著名的俗语“有志者,事竟成”。请以“Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way”为题写一篇100的短文,并发表自己的看法。 写作模板 学生习作 　　It is well-known to us that the proverb俗语/谚语. It means that俗语/谚语的涵义. Indeed,we can learn many things from it.For one thing,列举1. For example,举例. For another,列举2. Last but not least,列举3. In my opinion,我的观点. If you understand the proverb and apply it to your study or work,you will necessarily benefit a lot from it. Where There Is a Will,There Is a Way It is well-known to us that the proverb “Where there is a will,there is a way.”It means that anyone who has a strong mind can achieve his goal.Indeed,we can learn many things from it. For one thing,when you failed to do something,never lose heart. For example,Thomas Edison failed about 2,000 times before he succeeded in inventing the light. For another,as it is widely recognized that thought decides behavior,nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person. Last but not least,confronting with enormous difficulties or frustration,only a man holding a steel will can get through and embark on a new way with a promising prospect. In my opinion,living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce,a strong will seems more necessary. If you understand the proverb and apply it to your study or work,you will necessarily benefit a lot from it. 名师点评 本文对该句谚语对人们的启迪分析得非常到位,在分析的过程中用了for ong thing,for another,last but not least等过渡词语,使文章生动流畅,这是亮点一；在写作过程中用了大量的高级词汇及句式,如remind sb. that...,achieve one’s goals, lose heart,determined,persistent,confront,enormous, embark on,fierce等,使文章生动有趣,这是亮点二；最后一句用了条件状语从句,留给了读者广阔的思考空间,为亮点三。 仿写训练 根据下面的汉语提示,写一篇100词的英语短文。 古人云：“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)。请你描述你生活中的一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。 参考范文 There is an old saying that there must be a use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view,there is no difference between one person and another with some useful talent,and everyone will make his contributi