2015 申请信-音乐社团+夏令营.pptVIP

书面表达： 假定你是高一（1）的李华，得知校音乐社（music club）招收新人，欢迎各班学生参加。请给音乐社主席Mrs. Song写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容包括： 1. 自我介绍（音乐方面的兴趣、能力等） 2. 参加意图（参加社团活动，丰富课余生活， 提升音乐品味） 3.希望获准 注意：词数100左右；适当增加细节，以使行 文连贯；邮件开头和结尾已给出。 注意点： 1. 卷面得分： 18: 4.08 14.71 20: 4.8 16.02 17：4.16 14.4 19: 4.6 16.05 2. 申请信： * 结构： 2-3 paras --开门见山：Who? What (prupose)? --阐述意图：Reasons for joining --表达愿望 * 语言： 书面语/ 语气委婉 hello; thats all; I want to ask you whether Im willing to join the club; Youll be lucky to have me in your club. Expressions: 1. 在音乐有天赋 2. 认为音乐重要 3. 音乐有利身心 4. 参加社团活动 5. 丰富课余生活 6. 提升音乐品味 7. 获得批准 8. 欣喜若狂 be wild with joy have a gift/talent for music attach great importance to be beneficial/of benefit to ones physical and mental health take part in club activities enrich after-school life improve ones taste for music improve ones ability of appreciating music meet with ones approval 1) 我是来自高一1班的李华。 -- Im Li Hua, a student from Class1, Senior 1. 2) 得知音乐社招新人，对此感兴趣 * The music club now welcomes new members from every class * I have learnt that the music club... , * Word comes that ... , -- and Im interested in it/ I have a keen interest in it. -- so Im writing to apply for it. -- so Im writing in the hope that I can be admitted into/to the club. 3）结尾： * 我将十分开心，若你能给予我机会 --I would be most happy if you could favor me with this chance * 感谢您考虑我的申请，盼望早收到回复。 --Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you. * 我将感激若能被社团录取。 -- I would be grateful/ appreciate it if I could be admitted to the club. * Nothing could be better if ... /I sincerely hope Dear Mrs Song, Im Li Hua, a student from Class1, Senior1. Ive learnt that the Music Club is now recruiting new members from every class and Im interested in it. I have been learning piano since I was a kid and thanks to my ability to play the musical instrument, I was able to won several awards in some competitions. I have always dream