2017.4 高三英语海淀一模小作文讲评.pptVIP

海淀一模书面表达第一节讲评 Guess how many of you want to be teachers in our class? More than ten. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划，请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1. 希望从事的职业； 2. 选择该职业的原因； 3. 你打算为之做何准备。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 评分标准 1.内容完整 2.条理清楚 3.交际得体 4.语言准确 Dear Jim, How is everything going? I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my career plan for the future. Now I am writing to share it with you in details. I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency, the top one in China, last year. I chose it as my career based on the following two reasons. First, it is a job that can get me exposed to new things every day and thus keep me energetic and passionate all the time since I really hate to follow the same routine every day. Second, working as a journalist can make my childhood dream of being a hero come true by fighting against evil and spreading justice. To achieve this goal, I plan to apply for the Communication University of China, whose major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years in a row across the whole country. After getting my Bachelor Degree of Journalism, I will continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden my horizons to better fit my future post. That is all about my career plan. What do you think of it? I am looking forward to hearing yours if you have got one. Yours, Li Hua Para.1 得体的问候、交际，引出下文 Para.2:要点1：职业选择 Para.2:要点2：原因、理由 Para.3:要点3：所做准备 Para.4 得体的交际，话语交接意识 Read the three versions of the reason part, discuss with your partner about which is the best and tell the reasons why. The reason why I want to be an English teacher is I have a high command of English. I can speak English fluently. I am also a careful person who can teach people in need. I am sure that I will prove my ability in the future. As for me, I dream to be an excellent history teacher. The reason why I expect to be a teacher is that