凤凰国际英语 化写作4语言润色与结课评估.pptVIP

雅思强化写作四 今日内容： 1）课后作文单独讲评 2）大作文语言润色问题：高分范文 3）互动练习：注重语言润色 4）限时写作与讲评 语句的润色 短句+长句 简单句+亮点句 状语前置 状语前置就是把一个修饰动词的状语结构，如介词短语，分词形式或动词不定式引导的短语放到句首。 使用状语前置的最大优点是让单调的句子有了跳跃的节奏感。考官一天看上百张考卷，看到这样的句子也会心情愉悦。 Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. 2) Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes. 3) With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries. 插入语 此种语法结构是可以理解为是状语前置的另一种变体，它将状语结构提到了主句的主语和谓语之间。插入语也是相对地道的英语表达方法。 能使句子更有跳跃感和地道。 1) Universities, when it is running well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well as professional training. 2) So overall, I believe that, attending school from a young age is good for most children. 倒装句 即把谓语提前到主语之前，用在作文中比较新颖。 对比 1). The parents should spend time on their children, they should also communicate with them. 2). We can never lose sight of the significance of education. 1). Not only should parents spend time on their children, they are also advised to interact with them. 2). On no account / by no means / in no way can we lose sight of the significance of education. 强调句 It is … that … / It is … who …正是…导致了 It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops。 分词 -ing -ed 综合运用 主题内容： “二十世纪末科技的繁荣，人们开始广泛使用电脑 。” 不同的高分句型表述 1). witness 句型 The late 20th century witnessed the prosperity in science and technology, thereby giving rise to the wide application of computers. 2). With结构状语前置 With the prosperity in science and technology in the late 20th century, the computers were widely applied. 3). 倒装句 So flourishing was the science and technology in the late 20th century that computers were widely applied in various fronts. 4). 强调句型 It was the prosperity in science and technology in the late 20th century that gave rise