非谓语在英语写作中的运用.ppt

* 宝岛台湾美丽而神秘，越来越多游客到台湾观光旅游。请你根据下表内容介绍有关台湾的一些情况。 ［写作内容］ 台湾地区经济、文化发展迅速，台湾人(Taiwanese）热情友好，文明有礼 是一个多山的海岛，风景秀丽，有很多闻名中外的名胜古迹，每年大量游客慕名前来观光 36，000平方公里 约22，000，000人 中国东南部，是中国最大的岛屿 社会评价 特征 面积 人口 地理位置 Taiwan was located in the southeast of China and it is the biggest island in China. It cover an area of 36 thousand square kilometers and has a population of 22 million. Taiwan is surrounded by a lot of mountains is well-known for its natural scenery and many places of interest. Taiwanese are enthusiastic, friendly and polite to others and Taiwan is attracted many tourists to visit every year. The economy and culture develop rapidly in Taiwan. 优点：1.要点齐全 2.表达基本流畅 缺点：1.句子的表达有错误 2.句子结构简单,句式单一 is covers which attracts 时态 主谓一致 主从句混淆 语态 在英语写作中的运用 ——少米之炊，大有可为 By Huang Ying A.安全性 B.简洁而不简单 C.高效（得分效率=最终得分÷答题耗时) 当王老师走进教室拿丢在那里的钥匙的时候，他看到同学们正在读书。 Entering the classroom to get the keys lost there, Mr. Wang saw students reading. When Mr. Wang entered the classroom to get the keys that he had lost there, he saw students reading 为什么要用非谓语? 1. 被老师批评后，他决定要努力学习。 一. 用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。 He was criticized by his teacher. He decided to study hard. 二. 确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。 Criticized by his teacher, he decided to study hard. 非谓语做状语或定语 2. 假如天气允许，我们就可以去爬山。 一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。 Weather permits. We will go to climb the mountain. 二. 确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。 Weather permitting, we will go to climb the mountain. 3.翟志刚身着中国制造的花费3000万人民币的航天服在太空中行走。 一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。 Zhai Zhigang walked in space. He wore a spacesuit. The spacesuit was made in China. The spacesuit cost 30 million yuan. 二. 确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。 Zhai Zhigang walked in space, wearing a spacesuit made in China and costing 30 million yuan. 1.这部以英文写成的小说在世界各地受到了青年人的追捧。 2.昨天，万教授接受采访时，谈到了饮食与健康的关系。 3.站在山顶上我们可以看到全城. 4.还有很多工作要做，他没有被允许外出。 即时练习(请运用 非谓语 翻译下列句子) The novel is popular among the youngsters all over the world. written in English