20111118_093617_大的学英语四级写作强化.ppt

大学英语四级写作;四级写作内容篇; 2 Recreational Activities (2008. 6) 3. What Electives to Choose (2007. 12) 4. Welcome to Our Club (2007. 6) 5. Volunteers Needed (2006. 6) 6. Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist? (2005. 12) 7. Teachers’ Day (2005. 6) 8. A Campaign Speech (2005. 1) 9. A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction (2004. 6) 10. A Letter in Reply to a Friend (2004. 1) ; 关于此类题材的近五年的真题作文列举如下： 1. Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags (2008. 12) 2. Spring Festival Gala on CCTV (2006. 12) --3 How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent? （2010.12） 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立, 父母应该…… 四级作文命题透析;;;;;;;;;;;用词是否恰当，准确，形象，关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；;;;角色与功能;允许与阻止;Enable, encourage, entitle;Stop, keep, prevent, prohibit;;;;;;;;影响与冲击; When asked about the function of media, many people agree to the first view. 此外，表示“多”的词还有：vast, quite a few, an army of, an ocean of , a sea of , a great number of… Cheating in exam happens in our daily life. Dishonesty occurred more and more in our society. ;Obviously, the picture shows that a culture of one nation may become international, which is beneficial to all the human beings. show: indicate, reveal, suggest, prove As the number shows, nearly 200 billion dollars are lost in tobacco every year. number: figure, statistics ; 用词的生动性;;;;;;;It---句型的广泛使用;变换句式优化文章 Lecture 1 长句和短句变换 Lecture 2 主动句和被动句变换 Lecture 3 非谓语从句变换 Lecture 4 比较句变换 Lecture 5 松散到紧凑变换 ; 变换句式优化文章;【例2】 【例3】;【例4】 ;2. 长句变短句 长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面追求复杂句子，反而会显得华而不实，成为表达的累赘。写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定。短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精炼，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的大忌。 【例1】 【原文】His father, who is a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 【优化】His father, a salesman, became a millionaire overnight. 【例2】 【原文】Perhaps they basically distrusted our capacity to judge correctly