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* Writing Teacing Aim: Enable students to learn and master the good structure of a passage and learn the writing process. Writing Strategies: one formula; outlining;polishing prefer persuade comment determine imagine socialize search organize bother schedule Revision (Share your sentences with us) 目前中学生出国热在中国很流行,请以 Studying abroad 为题, 就此事发表自己的看法. The writing task A. I think studying abroad is a double-edged thing. It has advantages and disadvantages. B. Studying abroad is really a very popular phrase these years. Almost all of the students including me want to study abroad. A friend of mine has been studying abroad in America for a year…… C. More and more people study abroad now, but I don’t think it’s good for middle school students. D. These days more and more students are dreaming about studying abroad. They believe studying abroad is the right way for them to succeed. Which two paragraphs contain the focus for the whole passage? Decide a focus(main idea) before you start to write and state it in the first paragraph. The first writing rule: The second writing rule: Support is the flesh and blood of the writing. Writing tip: The support for the main idea can be in the form of: facts; examples; statements; personal experiences 1. At present, many students go abroad for further education. And that becomes the topic of everyone. Some say it is a good way to widen their views but I don’t think it is suitable for everyone. 2. In American culture, the rose is a symbol(象征) of love and beauty. A young man gives roses to his girlfriend to show her how much he loves her. The singers get lots of roses after their performance from their supporting fans. Roses are found in many colors and kinds. Delete the sentence that has nothing to do with the focus of the paragraph. The conclusion at the end of the passage can emphasize the focus. The third writing rule: 1.In a word, I think people should think twice before they make a decision to study aboad. 2. I hope