第七章 高分作文对策.ppt

高分作文对策 高分作文标志 注意事项 最经典的替换词 经典句型 高分作文标志 1. 是否长短句交叉； 2. 是否会使用插入语； 3. 用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸 引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4. 关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 5. 句型使用是否准确、地道。 写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用We / I 如写结尾时不用We should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to 经典结尾 六级作文的最后一段： It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，用形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等) 比如上面例子中，It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 优秀作文(14分)的例子： Computer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoyed a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 thrilling 替换 sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 google 替换 an army of 替换 The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! increasing popularity 替换 Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 advancement 替换 pour into ( flood into / swar