英语四级写作冲.ppt

1.As is vividly demonstrated in the picture, huge numbers of people elbow their way to climb up into the gold bowl which represents the civil service post. 2.It obviously tells us that people’s passion for the civil service positions has kept increasing, and an growing number of people strive to take the annual civil service examination. 3.In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a large amount of population to try their luck in such a fierce competition. 4. I think it is not advisable for people to overvalue the civil service exam when looking for jobs. 5.The following explanation can give a better illustration of my point of view. 6. It could be found that the changeless and rigid government job is not suitable for everyone, therefore, one should make a full assessment before making his own decision. 7. For my part, it is understandable to take civil service posts as an alternative when looking for jobs. However, one need to question himself whether the “gold bowl” job really fits him well. 8. Consequently, we should encourage and advocate people to take other options into consideration such as working in a private company or even staring their own business. 重点注意下 环境保护：环境恶化、资源匮乏 中西交流：出国留学、回国创业等等 社会公德：违反公德的行为 文化教育：读书、大学教育等等 祝大家顺利通过四六级 @宋氏平民 英语四级写作冲刺抢分秘籍 宋平明 @宋氏平民 一、好的四六级作文的标准 1、切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 2、卷面好看 3、逻辑清晰，三段论 2014年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? 14分的开头 Known as the Oriental Pearl, Shanghai has not only the prosperous economy but also the unique culture of its own. If a foreign friend of mine would visit my hometown, Shanghai, I strongly recommend him to visit Yu Garden. 11分的开头 If a friend of mine ever comes to visit my hometown, Tengwang Ge i