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书面表达 假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友张平打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信： 1.语言是道硬门槛 2.适应能力很重要 3.兴趣爱好被看重 4.要有社会责任感 注意：词数100左右 Dear Zhang Ping, I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities. As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed. This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck. Yours Mike 重要的表达方式： 1.Having a good command of the local language is a must. 2….plays an indispensible role/part in… attach great importance to…. We can not emphasize too much the importance of … What is the most important is that you can speak English fluently, without which you can’t live a comfortable life. 6.It is important/essential/vital that … 7.There is no doubt/denying that… 8.It is …that counts/matters. 9.It can’t be denied that… If possible If any 提建议时： what comes first is that…, then…, last but not least…. * Learning aim: Learn some tips on how to improve and polish our English writing. 漂亮规范的书写 是写作得分的亮点 Tip 1：作文的卷面和书写 Tip2： 人靠衣装，文靠词装 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜 1.词性的转化 Important – be responsible for society--- benefit you a lot---- is of great benefit is beneficial to be of great importance social resposibility 2.同义、近义表达 attractive--- more and more people--- more and more important--- appealing/fascinating/inviting an increasing number of people increasingly significant