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雅思经典仿写范文6篇 (1) Some people propose that smoking should be banned completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 首段背景铺垫+核心主题+题目改写+作者观点+原因过渡（5元素，3~4句话）Along with the advances of society, a growing number of controversies have been brought to our attention, one of which is smoking背景铺垫+核心主题. Some people suggest that the government should totally prohibit smoking题目改写. However，I am deeply convinced that it is unwise(for it) to forbid the practice作者观点for the following reasons原因过渡. 二段分论点（1）+3~4句扩展To start with, taxes from tobacco industry never fail to exert conducive effects on a nation’s economic progresses.本段中心句Hardly can anyone deny that they contribute much to the administrations’ revenues．For instance, governments in varied countries collect an astronomical amount of capital from smokers to pay for their public utilities such as education and medicare. If smoking is banned, there will be a great loss to the government’s incomes, which would play an adverse role in the country’s overall development. 三段分论点（2）+3~4句扩展In addition, those who strongly approve of the ban ignore smokers’ rights. 本段中心句That is to say, they attach too much importance to the rights of nonsmokers．Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. Not only is it a kind of lifestyle, but also a stress reliever，which enables smokers to gain easy access to great delight. Needless to say，for smokers，nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit． 四段让步论证+1~2句扩展It is admitted that smoking is, to some extent, detrimental to people’s well-being．本段中心句According to a recent survey, the average longevity/life expectancy (span) for smokers is marginally lower than that of non-smokers and the likelihood for them to infect cancer-related diseases is somewhat higher as well. 末段削减论证+结论+【分论点重述+升华/展望】（2~4元素，2~4句话）However，the harm that smoking does to people’s health is exaggerated．From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that it is irrational for the government to