高中英语作文教学课件1.pptVIP

主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山 The body part Point1: 50%的学生认为 * Writing 教学目标： 1.灵活运用所学英语语法，词汇，组句成文。 2.准确表达表格中涉及的要点。 1.说起什么是幸福这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。 2.一些人认为幸福就是取得成功，赚很多钱，而另一些人认为幸福意味着有很多朋友陪伴左右。 3.在我看来，幸福取决于对生活的态度，而不是一个人的贫富。 4.然而无论幸福是什么，成就我们幸福的重要因素有两个，即爱与健康。 5.因此，要想幸福，无论何时何地，我们都必须保持健康，让自己充满爱。 When it comes to the question what is happiness, different people hold different views. Some people think happiness is achieving success and earning much money,while others argue that happiness means being surrounded by friends. In my opinion, happiness depends on a persons attitude to life, not whether he or she is rich or poor. However, whatever happiness is, therere two important factors contributing to our happiness, that is, love and health. Therefore, to be happy we must stay healthy and make ourselves full of love, anytime, anywhere. 中央电视台曾推出一期特别调查节目“幸福是什么？”。一时间，“幸福”成了各媒体使用的高频词汇。在英语课上，老师在全班同学中进行了幸福的调查，请你根据以下提示，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 有兴趣爱好和梦想 20% 学业成功，考上重点大学 30% 衣食无忧， 备受关爱 50% 幸福感的来源 被调查学生比例 你的感想 谈谈你的幸福观以及怎样获得幸福 Writing practice 调查结果 写作基本步骤： 1.仔细审题，列举大纲。 2.围绕要点，写出句子。 3.添加过度，确保连贯。 4.先求正确，再求灵活. 5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。 Can you list the outline of the writing? Introduction (topic) Body (supporting ideas) Conclusion The outline of the writing: Conclusion paragraph: … Introduction paragraph: … Point 2… Body Point 1… supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 Key words: 进行调查 carry out a surry Introduction: Whats the topic? How will you start your passage? Point2: 30%的学生认为 Point3: 20%的学生认为 巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系 Conclusion 我认为： The discussion about happiness has recently attracted peoples attention. Our English teacher has carried out a survey about what is happiness in our class. The result are as follows. 50% of the students feel happy about their comfortable life without worrying about food and clothing. About 30%of the students find happiness in their academic achievement and their confidence in going to key