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One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. friends beside an ﹨ was gratefully but someone ∧ expecting to 短文改错备考建议 一 多读英语书，培养正确语感 二 多看小作文，注意发现错误 三 错误分类找，牢记设错规律 书面表达评分原则 1、本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3、评分时应考虑：内容要点、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。 4、拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5、书写较差以致影响交际，降低一个档次； 6、词数少于80或多于120，从总分中减去2分。  2009年辽宁卷的书面表达 假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。 时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00 内容：采摘苹果 报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：戴帽子、手套 欢迎踊跃参加 注意：1. 词数100左右，开头已为你写好。 2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 Dear neighbors, We are happy to announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members. Next Saturday, we are going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome. We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting. Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock. If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements. We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves. We are looking forward to your joining us. （98词） Community Office Dear neighbors, We are happy to announce that our community is going to organize