2009高考改错.pptVIP

第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分） 第一节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题一分，满 分10分） 下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地 方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其 下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写 上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起不 计分。 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself , and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. _____ friends __ an ______ beside __ was ______ gratefully ___ but ________ someone _____ expecting ∧ to Dear sunny, It’s very glad that you want to make friends with the girl. In my opinion, you’d better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two. And I also think it’s better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on. Besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you. Just share happiness and sadness with her. And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future.