如何撰写中英文摘要(生院)(第二次)试卷.ppt

摘要中常见错误 从总体结构上 缺少研究目的 结果部分深浅详略参差不齐 添加不必要的自我评价 摘要中常见错误 从各个主要元素间的联系上 对 “论文主导”和 “研究主导” 不明确 语气不连贯 连接词选取不当 主谓语搭配不当 状语与主语搭配不当 不定式或In order to 表示目的时 To examine how…, Linear regression was used to… In order to assess whether …, the …method was applied to… Based on 做状语 摘要中常见错误 其他方面 30~36% 30 %–36% From 30 %–36% From 30 % to 36% 86±12 mm (86±12) mm 数字 英文数字和阿拉伯数字的用法 句子开头用英文数字而不能用阿拉伯数字； 单位是符号时一律用阿拉伯数字； 3 g; 6 m; 8 yr; 18 s 等 文字叙述中的数字 小于等于10的数一般用英文； 大于10的数用阿拉伯数字； 两者同时有的时候都用阿拉伯数字； 最新发展趋势是能用阿拉伯数字的地方都用阿拉伯数字 数字 英文数字和阿拉伯数字的用法 m = 5 kg； m = 5 kilograms; m = five kg; m = five kilograms; a 25-kilogram sphere a 25 kg sphere a 25-kg sphere; 摘要中常见错误 常见错误分析 A efficient method for establishing mathematical model was given. An efficient method for establishing a mathematical model was given. The calculated stresses of hardening of rotating disks were presented. The calculated stresses of the hardening of rotating disks were presented Distribution of residual stresses and its varying characteristics were also studied. The distribution of residual stresses and its varying characteristics were also studied. 摘要中常见错误 常见错误分析 7 epitaxial layers were grown on GaAs substrate. Seven epitaxial layers were grown on GaAs substrate The measuring accuracy varies from 2 - 5% with the efficiency of 65-80%. The measuring accuracy varies from 2% to 5% with the efficiency of 65%-80% The gain and the power are 10dB、5mW, respectively. The gain and the power are 10dB, 5mW, respectively. The threshold voltage is 2～3V. The threshold voltage is 2-3V 摘要中常见错误 常见错误分析 The expression of p16 gene in 80 cases of eripheral lung cancer tissues was detected through immunohistochemistry SP way. The expression of p16 gene in 80 cases of peripheral lung cancer tissues was detected by immunohistochemistry SP method The relationship between carbone missions and socio-economic development wer