八年级下册英语作文辅导技巧概要1.ppt

你家楼上来了一位新邻居，他们经常做一些事干扰了你的生活，请根据下面的内容写一封信，向他们合理提出要求 。 Beginning: 1.Would you mind/not doing sth? 2.Could you please/not do sth.? Play the drum late into night Sing too loud in the early morning Drop litter around in the hallways Play at home 加 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 1.As soon as 2.So 3.what’s more 4.Thanks for 5.however 连 恰当运用关联词语，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 6.表示对比: not…but, on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, in fact, 10.表示结论: altogether, in a word, generally speaking, 美 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 So would you mind not singing too loud in the early morning? And your son’s playing ball at home all day. Would you mind asking him not to play it there ? There is a big playground in front of our neighborhood. What’s more , your daughter plays music , too. My little boy starts to cry as soon as she plays the crazy music. 　Thank you for your understanding. Beginning:I feel so nice to have you as my neighbor. However, I have to tell you have also given some trouble to me . First , would you mind talking with your wife in a low voice? I can’t do anything when I hear the noise every day . Next , I can usually find some trash outside my house . It smells terrible . So could you please not drop it there ? Finally , your son is always playing his CDs too loud. Would you mind asking him to put on his earphones ? Thank you for your understanding/cooperation 语言是否正确, 规范地道。 避免中国式英语 书面表达 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 书面表达六步法 第五步 查错改错 六 步 法 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 一、审题 确定基本要素:5W1H 记叙文(尤其是故事性的) 五个“W”，1个H,即： when, where, who, what,why, how 二、抓要点 确定主要行为 What happened? 三、扩展成句 形成基本语义单位 Who did what? 四、连句成文 时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应 * Play ball at home Tommy play CD/drum too aloud Li