台州市区 读后续写公开课 2016.10.25 课件概要1.pptVIP

No matter how difficult it was, their love would lead the way for them. My theme for the story: True love never fails Decide the theme for the story Cherish what you have Solve the problems positively Never give up when in trouble (A) (B) (C) (D) True love never fails But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Tired and disappointed, Jane felt hopeless and couldnt help blaming herself. The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her, making her feel even more regretful for her foolish behavior. She had no choice but to stop for another night, spending the long and lonely night. A gust of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug. Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their family life. As for Tom, the concern for his wife grew with the passage of time. He was in the helicopter, searching for Jane with all his efforts. Though the search proved fruitless, the difficulty was no match for his deep love and firm determination. It was daybreak when she woke up. She drank and ate a few berries as the day before. She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter at a distance came into sight. With the sound getting louder and closer, she jumped, yelled and waved the yellow blouse with all her strength to be noticed. To her great joy, she was spotted and the helicopter landed in a minute. It was Tom who jumped out of the helicopter first. He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly. “Thank Goodness, I know you will come to me.” Jane sobbed. Despite the big sound of helicopter, Jane could still hear the gentle words “Honey, I love you.” from Tom. No matter how difficult it was, their love would lead the way for them. One possible version of final draft * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 台州市第一中学 周永鹏 台州市区 读后续写讲评课 2016.10.25 barbecue sunrise a sea of clouds tent windmill风车 sausage香肠 Q1：Where did I camp? Q2：In your opinion, what should be taken to make a good