外研社 Module 3 my first ride on a train 写作概要1.ppt

Brainstorming: 试着描述一次你的旅行，写出相关的可能涉及到的要点： Writing 写作五步骤 1. 审清主题 看题目中涉及到了哪些关键点，这些点要全部包含其中 2. 搜集素材 素材的收集 一定要在已经将关键点包含其中的基础上，在头脑中进行相关的内容串联。 3. 编写句子： 句子的编写过程中要主要句子成分一定要完整；具体的语法使用一定要正确 （主谓一致，主格，宾格，固定短语等）；省略掉累赘不必要的句子。 4. 提示技巧 回忆自己曾经记忆过的好的句型，将简单句适当转换为高级句子。 5.Write a Paragraph\Paragraphs 连句成文 Firstly , First, First of all, Secondly, Then, After this/that, Finally, Last, Lastly, and, however, therefore. ITEMS DETAILS time places persons transport What to do Weather; climate How we feel ITEMS DETAILS time Last summer holiday On the National Day At the age of twelve Last Sunday place The ___ Mountain The Summer Palace（颐和园） The museum the Forest Park（森林公园） persons With my cousins With my parents With my aunts With my friends transport By train By bus By subway By bike What to do Climb mountain, See foreigners, Talk, Learn from each other Go boating, Have a picnic, Be caught with a heavy rain Tired, expensive, Too many visitors, enjoy themselves, want to visit once more Weather; Climate Snowy; Winter. Cold Cloudy; Summer hot Sunny; Autumn/fall cool Rainy; Spring warm How we feel excited Enjoyed ourselves unforgettable Memorable（难忘的，值得纪念的） August 14th,it was cloudy. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road （大洋路）in Australia.（时间，天气，人物，目的地） We started from Melbourne. We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests. (旅程 以及交通工具） We saw some kangaroos and koalas along the road. （见闻） Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the Great Ocean Road. （注意写作中连词的运用） At this moment it began to rain cats and dogs.猛烈的大雨（旅途中的天气变化） In the rain, the waves ,rocks and winds looked splendid(壮观). (旅途中的景色） I took a lot of pictures there.(我的活动） After a while, the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared.（天气变化） In the sun, the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden. It’s very beautiful. This is a memorable trip. (结束语：多为对上文写作内容的总结，可表达自己的感受等） August 14, it was a cloudy winter in Australia. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road. We