河南2015年中招写作专项备考训练.pptVIP

2015中考英语书面表达专题训练 洛阳市汝阳县蔡店一中九五班2015.5.12 学习目标 1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气 3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。 中考作文高分秘诀 1. 谋篇布局 ——写好篇章结构 2. 运用连接词 ——赋予语言灵气 谋篇布局——写好篇章结构 Good beginning is half done. 1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句 2. 开头万能句型： 1) ....plays an important part in the... 2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more.... 3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in .... 4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so. 5) I will never forget the .... Make a topic sentence. 1.Smoking 2. The Spring Festival 3. Learning English Make a topic sentence. Make a topic sentence. Make a topic sentence. 正文：语言简洁，层次分明 长句短句交叉使用最好。 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。 把握要点，层次清晰。 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。 正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气 按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally 3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during 表示并列 not only... but also, both... and, either ...or, neither...nor，on (the) one hand…on the other hand 表示举例或补充 1）for example 2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse 表示转折 however, but，although, instead of 表示原因 thanks to, because of，because 表示结果 as result (of) , so ，so...that, such...that, 表目的 in order to, so that 表比较 the same as, than, of all ... Which sentence is better? I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. 2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. 句式富于变化 We are good friends. We should help each other. 2.We are good friends and we should help each other. 3. As we are good friends , we should help each other. 句式富于变化 I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word. (good ) 2. I was_____ moved ______ say a word. (better) 结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应 1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后 In a word, ... 总而言之 In short, ... 简言之 We hope that··· 我们希望 Let’s try our best to ....