新GRE写作高分攻略之写作基础和语法概要1.doc

GRE 写作课件之写作基础语法！！ 在过去8年+的教学生涯中，笔者意识到没有基础的写作语法，完全依赖模板和例子背诵的同学GRE写作的分数一般在2---3之间。可见，写作的基础是非常重要的。 写作基础： STRAITFORD SENTENCE STURUCTURE 写句子和单词时，请避免CLUTTER Avoid vague and ambigious language We saw lots of improvement We saw significant improvement Various Our choices for subcontractors are somewhat limited Our choices for subcontractors are sevely limited 3.Ambigious pronone reference No entreprenure should tell a client that he is overly concerned with image ( who is he) No entreprenure should accuse a client of being overly concerned with image. TIPS: Sometimes, it is great to repeat a n. rather than rely on a pronone. It may be cost effective to rely on subcontratcors instead of company personel, as the company ( they is not clear) personel would certainly require extra training. 4.Don’t forget about Antecedent 先行词( don’t use pronone without antecedent) 5.Avoid ambious words ( this,that,it, which to refer to a pharase, sentece and idea.) The candidate changed his position on all the key issues, which made the voters extremely nervous( which means what? His position? Key issues?) 6.BE CONCISE, NOT BE WORDY As a matter of fact/ in fact In order to/ to In this day and age/today In light of the fact that/ because In spite of the fact that/ though 7.UNECESSARY CLAUSES Which/that/who … This is my favourite toy which was bought by my parents who loved to buy me gifts when I was young. This is my favourite toy; my parents bought it for my 10th birthday party. 8. balance sentence structure WORDY: The Truman Doctrine, which was established in 1947, created a policy of containment. Clear, established in 1947, the Truman Doctrine created a policy of containment. More clear: The 1947 Trumen Doctrine created a “policy of containment. Wordy: There be/ it is essential that. 9. Unnecessary repetition: Information/ knowledge Innovation/creativity Small-sized: small Grouped together: group Few in number: few Climb up: climb Star box Press the pin num