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（2004作文答案） Today my classmates and I went to the Old Peoples Home on foot at 3 oclock in the afternoon. As soon as we got there, we began to clean the rooms and wash clothes for the old people. Some of us talked with them. After that we gave them some performances. The old people enjoyed themselves very much. We stayed there for two hours. At about 5 oclock we walked home. I felt very happy ( for what I had done) although I was tired. I think everyone should look after and respect old people. (2005作文答案） Dear Wang Fei, I’m glad you are interested in the English Corner. I’d like to tell you something about it. Last month we had the English Corner on Friday afternoons in the library of our school. Not only a few students but also two teachers took part in it. Some of us read English books and newspapers. Some of us practiced spoken English. The teachers also taught us English songs. Since I took part in the English Corner, my spoken English has improved. Now I’m able to speak English in front of the class. And I find it not so difficult to learn English as before. Li Lei （2005）书面表达评分标准 一、内容要点 1．时间地点 2．参加人员 3．活动内容 4．感受 二、评分细则 先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。 第五档（15－13分） 完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。 第四档（12－10分） 符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档（9－7分） 符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇错误很多，语言欠通顺。 第二档（6－4分） 部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，所写内容难以理解 第一档（3－0分） 与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。 （2006参考答案） One possible versionJune 8,2006 ,Thursday? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?FineThis afternoon our school held an English singing competition on the playground.??Each class sang two songs.??About twenty students in every class took part in the competition.??Our performance was successful.??We sang the song We are the world.? ? It was the mostpopular song in the competition.? ?So our class won the first prize.? ? All of us felt proud of it. I find it is interesting to learn English songs.??I hope I