2013年高考把心唤醒（In 2013, the college entrance examination awakened the heart）.docVIP

2013年高考把心唤醒（In 2013, the college entrance examination awakened the heart） Six senior high school entrance exam composition awakes my heart 8 essay reviews (2009-02-20 and 15:25:28) Tags: Campus Seven, writing (60 points) 22., please contact your life and feelings, to arouse the heart in the title, write a not less than 800 words of argumentative or narrative. Note: this test for the Hunan Normal University high school, Changsha City, Changde City, Zhuzhou city in a second, one in Xiangtan city (Yueyang city), six school entrance exam, the volume of Chinese Xueyao by Changde city Tang Dengzhong, Li Hongbin, Liu proposition. Marking impression: It should be said that the classmates composition is more better, perhaps marking the teacher also contains a point near the actual give encouragement to enhance students confidence in the exam factors, this essay divides the students per grade refresh monthly exam topic records, 48.3. No one from the composition grade basically, only three or four students in writing without volume (not enough words), noodles are generally neat, there are some special beautiful writing papers. Particularly gratifying is that, to reduce the thousand phenomenon of writing students showed different features, performance of the living composition more expressing real feelings. Major issues: There are 1. questions is not accurate enough. My heart wakes up, wake up, that is to say, the heart is in a sleep state, numbness, cold state, this state is not shown, wake up is attached, but in this state is not enough to show some of the students. Accordingly, awakening, when it is conscience, human nature, sincerity, and so on, like rational a kind of, always feel still a bit not cut, rational needs is calm, not wake up. 2. about material selection. The composition of many students with the 4.13 Lhasa event as the material, write those sold separatists to wake up, or by the incident, to wake up Chinese peoples patriotism. From this topic, it can be written