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句式高、句子鲜，阅卷老师定位于五档线——得高分 书面表达： 第3课时 桂东一中李应深 Step 1.Lead-in by comparing two passages. 思考：哪篇短文写得更好？为什么？ Passage1: When the College Entrance Examination is approaching, many students feel stressed and anxious. Here Id like to give some advice. I hope it can help ease your anxiety. Firstly, please keep an active and optimistic attitude. Attitude is everything. Too much anxiety will have a bad effect on our health. It also makes it difficult for us to concentrate on our study. Secondly, to prepare for the examination, wed better make a proper plan and keep to it. Try to overcome the difficulties we come across. Turn to our teachers for help. Finally, when we are tired, we can do some sports, listen to music or have a good sleep to get relaxed. In a word, relax yourself and be the best of what you are. Passage2: With the College Entrance Examination approaching, many students feel stressed and anxious. Here Id like to give some advice, which I hope can help ease your anxiety. Firstly, please keep an active and optimistic attitude. As the saying goes, attitude is everything. Too much anxiety will not only have a bad effect on our health but also make it difficult for us to concentrate on our study. Secondly, to prepare for the examination, wed better make a proper plan and keep to it. Make every effort to overcome the difficulties we come across and turn to our teachers for help whenever we cant solve them on our own. Finally, when tired, we can do some sports, listen to music or have a good sleep to get relaxed. In summary, relax yourself and be the best of what you are. Step2 Skills of writing 一、长短句原则 二、主题句原则 三、多变句式原则 1．陈述不如倒装妙 2．主动不如被动巧 3．分词结构不能少 4．复合句式要用好 (1)使用名词性从句 (2)使用定语从句 (3)使用状语从句 1．He thought of an important way to deal with it.(用定语从句改写句子) → 2．I was tired and got out of breath when I reached the top o